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Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Scry, I left you an important DM. Will you please respond when you can, hopefully very soon? It's important because it's time sensitive. Thank you so much.

John Sheils's avatar

Great work. It’s a poem to be read out loud. Again and again

AsukaHotaru's avatar

“by grace, the letting go held me.”

okay but that’s a mic drop whispered into a pillow. soft hands, sneaky strength. this whole piece feels like it learned how to survive and then taught itself how to float. i’m still hovering a little.

More Than Poetry's avatar

Some say YHWH is simply the breathing in and the breathing out. This poem breathed, and I found myself matching my breath to it. 💛

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

So many great parts to this piece, but my favorite is:”By grace,

the guides became questions

with no interest

in being answered,

only in being asked

again and again

until the asking itself

became a kind of

arriving.”

Thank you!

A.x's avatar

Beautiful 💜

Ulysses Santillan's avatar

This poem is fully of "Grace." Great flow. Repetition. Visual. Wordplay. Thanks for the read.